Sorry I forgot to post this yesterday, everybody, but here is the second example paper. This one is a tall tale. Notice how the writer used the same type of “frame” that Mark Twain used in both of his stories. There are two narrators: the writer starts out then introduces a second speaker who tells the tall tale. You don’t have to, but you may want to use this technique, too.
To read the paper, click danielle’s tall tale example
Also, if you need some more practice with homonyms, run-ons, and fragments, click on the links below:
Run-0ns and fragments (scroll to bottom for quizzes)